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Suggest: “And yet your motor cortex is able to compensate.” This is the part of
the brain involved in physical coordination. Would this really be beyond Data’s
comprehension?

p. 93 (middle)

Barclay: “I could modulate the ship’s phasers to ignite patches of false vacuum in
our wake...”
Suggest: “I could try to disable their deflector control sensors with a magneton
pulse...”

p. 93 (middle)

Computer Voice: “Outer hull collapse imminent, deck six...”
Suggest: “Structural integrity field collapse”; or, “Irreversible atmospheric
decompression, deck six...”

p. 96 (top)

Riker: “What’s inside that dark matter cloud...?”

Suggest: “What’s inside that interstellar dust flow...?”

p. 97 (middle)
LaForge: “They’re tagging people with isolinear transceivers to override the transport
inhibitors...”

Suggest: “They’re tagging people with isolinear beacons to cut through the transport
inhibitors...”

p. 97 (middle)
Picard: “Can you neutralize the power source?”

Suggest: “Can you remodulate the transport inhibitors to compensate?”

p. 101 (top)

Barclay: “If one of their charges hits the pocket of gas... “

Suggest: “If one of their charges hits a pocket of metreon gas...”
p. 101 (top)

Riker: “... use the deflector to sweep up all the pockets of metreon gas you can find...”

Suggest: “... use a pulsed deflector beam to compress all the pockets of metreon
gas you can find...” I wasn’t thinking in terms of using the deflectors to sweep up
the gas, but rather to push pockets of gas into a dense ‘critical mass’ concentration.

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